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Registered: August 2007
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While I am somewhat happy with the composition, I am not happy with how Cloak came out. Not sure if I bit off more than I can chew or I am just teed off today.


Did I dodge when I should have burned or blurred where I should have left well enough alone....


A bit of an update, played around with the cloak a bit. I think it looks somewhat better.


UPDATE 2: Did some more softening of the edges and a few mistakes I didn't see at 2:00AM.
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MikeEllis

Registered: September 2007
Location: Austin, Texas
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Fri October 26, 2007 1:14am

What program are you using for the drawing? If it's Photoshop or something like, I think I could help you with the cloak.
hisstoryman
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Fri October 26, 2007 7:16am

Yeah its photoshop, I think I just haven't gotten a handle on the burn and dodge tools.
Tim
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Fri October 26, 2007 7:43am Rating: 8.00 

Like on Dagger everything looks excellent on the inside area, but on the line around her it looks a little jaggedy mainly around the hair area.
hisstoryman
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Fri October 26, 2007 11:03am

Did a bit more refining specifically on Dagger. For some reason it didn't look that bad on my computer.
MikeEllis

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Fri October 26, 2007 1:17pm

I'm making something for you that I think may help. I'll let you know when it's done.
Tim
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Fri October 26, 2007 2:37pm

Much better on Dagger!
hisstoryman
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Fri October 26, 2007 2:58pm

I appreciate whatever you do Mike but you don't have to go nuts for me.


and


Tim thanks for the updated critique. Now that I am looking at it I am not sure if I like the shadowing on her costume....


OH NO I AM TURNING INTO MIKE!!!!!!!!!
AmyLynn98
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Registered: April 2007
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Fri October 26, 2007 9:00pm Rating: 9.00 

I think with Cloak, the "problem" is because he's so fluid. There are a lot of folds in his cloak. And with Dagger, she's got that white suit. I think this is a really good one. Smile

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MikeEllis

Registered: September 2007
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Sat October 27, 2007 2:04am

Okay, historyman, here's a gift for you. 'hope it's useful. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dv6YqqIvaYM
And you're not turning into me. If you were, you'd go back and add seven commas to that last post. Wink
hisstoryman
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Sat October 27, 2007 7:12pm

Thanks Mike! Great tutorial.
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