MikeEllis
Registered: September 2007 Location: Austin, Texas Posts: 241
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Fri October 26, 2007 1:14am
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What program are you using for the drawing? If it's Photoshop or something like, I think I could help you with the cloak.
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hisstoryman
Registered: August 2007 Posts: 693
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Fri October 26, 2007 7:16am
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Yeah its photoshop, I think I just haven't gotten a handle on the burn and dodge tools.
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Tim
Registered: May 2006 Posts: 13,258
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Fri October 26, 2007 7:43am
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Rating: 8.00
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Like on Dagger everything looks excellent on the inside area, but on the line around her it looks a little jaggedy mainly around the hair area.
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hisstoryman
Registered: August 2007 Posts: 693
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Fri October 26, 2007 11:03am
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Did a bit more refining specifically on Dagger. For some reason it didn't look that bad on my computer.
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MikeEllis
Registered: September 2007 Location: Austin, Texas Posts: 241
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Fri October 26, 2007 1:17pm
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I'm making something for you that I think may help. I'll let you know when it's done.
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Tim
Registered: May 2006 Posts: 13,258
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Fri October 26, 2007 2:37pm
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Much better on Dagger!
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hisstoryman
Registered: August 2007 Posts: 693
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Fri October 26, 2007 2:58pm
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I appreciate whatever you do Mike but you don't have to go nuts for me.
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Tim thanks for the updated critique. Now that I am looking at it I am not sure if I like the shadowing on her costume....
OH NO I AM TURNING INTO MIKE!!!!!!!!!
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AmyLynn98
Registered: April 2007 Location: East Coast Posts: 788
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Fri October 26, 2007 9:00pm
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Rating: 9.00
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I think with Cloak, the "problem" is because he's so fluid. There are a lot of folds in his cloak. And with Dagger, she's got that white suit. I think this is a really good one. 
------------------------------ "A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men."
--Willy Wonka (Gene Wilder), 1971
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MikeEllis
Registered: September 2007 Location: Austin, Texas Posts: 241
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Sat October 27, 2007 2:04am
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Okay, historyman, here's a gift for you. 'hope it's useful. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dv6YqqIvaYM
And you're not turning into me. If you were, you'd go back and add seven commas to that last post.
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hisstoryman
Registered: August 2007 Posts: 693
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Sat October 27, 2007 7:12pm
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Thanks Mike! Great tutorial.
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Jerod
Registered: December 1901 Location: Lincoln, Nebraska Posts: 3,353
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Sun March 27, 2011 2:45pm
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Rating: 10.00
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