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 Raven Chapter Seven: and Then the Abyss 
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Comic Book Super Heroes Forum / Superhero Universe Characters / Crawlspace / Raven Chapter Seven: and Then the Abyss
Posted:  08 Sep 2009 08:16   Last Edited By: Bono Fett
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It's been a long week for James Kilpatrick, his job usually keeps him very busy but this week was especially wierd. James is the lead coroner in Nighthaven. So usually being knee deep in some poor schmo's intesines trying to count slugs is nothing new to him. But this week he has had seven decapitations three full eviscerations and one puddle of goo that still has yet to be identified. A really wierd week.Case in point, James is right now working on what appears to be half well nearly half of an adult caucasian male late thirties mixed with canine bones and fur all scooped up in a large tarp.
James is doing his best to seperate the different subjects but still it seems that some parts are connected.

"How the hell does this happen???"
James muses to himself, he inserts the rib spreaders and begins to catalogue the chest cavity. When something catches his eye.
"What was that?? " James checks to see if the cameras are recording." This is Lead Coroner James KIlpatrick, subject Jon Doe 9.7.09. While opening the chest cavity yand preparing to remove internal organs I observed what appeared to be a heart beat. It has been one full minute since the abboration was noticed and no second instance has been recorded. Subject was pronounced dead on arrival nearlt 15 hours ago..."
BUMP BUMP
"There it was again Subjects heart,"BUMP BUMP" Subject is regaining heart beat?? And blood flow!?!?"
" This is impossible!"
James runs from the table to the phone, at the same time a blood curdling scream erupts from the subject on the table. James turns to see the once dead cold corpse standing up. The thing before him is definitely not a caucasian male in his late thirties but is in fact a creature that defies description half man half beast and dripping blood from its wounds that are somehow mending themselves.

James drops the phone and runs for the door the beast lunges on him and tears into his flesh. Sharp claws and teeth tear chunks of muscle and bone from James' body while he screams and his life slips away bit by bit.

A srange blue light fills the room and in a burst of energy the wall behind the beast explodes. In the ash and smoke before James takes his last breath he sees the outline of a man carrying what appears to be a large glowing sword.

" Well the little doggie woke up?" His eyes glow bright crimson " Guess I was a little too easy on you, this time I'm going to take your head!!!!"

" Come then bearer of the Death Mask lets see what the Ancients have taught you!!!" The beast tosses the now lifeless coroner to the ground and leaps accross the autopsy room claws outstreched and fangs thursting for blood.

" Call me DeathChild Furball!!"

The battle goes out to the street DeathChild strikes the first blow taking the beast to his knees. "The Dragon Kuri glows blue in my hands and that same screaming song of death is all I can hear now. From this point on I'm on auto pilot."

He leaps forward sword straight out the blade cuts deep and comes through the back of the beast. The blue glow turns nearly white as the power surges till the beast expodes in a shower of gore. Amid the falling pieces of flesh. DeathChild stands firm as he sheathes the Dragon Kuri on his back he turns and laughs into the shadows.
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Posted:  08 Sep 2009 10:17   Last Edited By: new midnight avenger


Deathchild is wicked!
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Posted:  08 Sep 2009 14:42
Definitely scary stuff!
Posted:  08 Sep 2009 18:56
Look out Stephen King!
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Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.
Posted:  08 Oct 2009 21:08
Chilling! 
Posted:  11 Oct 2009 17:37
Quote:
Chilling! 


Go back and read chapter six Mark.
__________________
Hindsight is always 20/20...
But looking back it's still abit fuzzy. Dave Mustaine
Posted:  11 Oct 2009 18:04
Yeah man Chap six was great!
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Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.
Posted:  12 Oct 2009 06:46
Thanks Floyd.
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Hindsight is always 20/20...
But looking back it's still abit fuzzy. Dave Mustaine
Posted:  12 Oct 2009 17:34
No prob sir!
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Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

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