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Posted: 08 Sep 2009 14:42
	Registered User Currently Offline	Posts: 1 Join Date: Sep 2009
Hi there Tim, well I read quite a few episodes which means your comic definitely has some merit. I have a few criticisms too. Too much tell and not show. Too much information that isn't necessary. A character must have backstory but we don't need to know it. It can come out gradually if necessary. The bacstory makes him do what he does but doesn't have to be part of the story, it's just his past. Lack of character development. The hero considering whether revenge or killing is good or bad does not character make. It takes a bit more than this to make a character more than just 2D. The "wife" who likes roses and chocolates could like something a little more personal and distinctive I think. we all like flowers and chockies don't we? Love esther

Posted: 08 Sep 2009 14:48
	Administrator Currently Offline	Posts: 951 Join Date: May 2005
Thanks for the critique. I'm glad you have been reading. I'd be the first one to say I have a long way to go to being a great writer. Maybe I'll get more time to continue to work on my stories and hopefully improve over time. Certainly, even the best of writers wish nothing more but to improve as they go I'm sure.

Posted: 08 Sep 2009 18:52
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Quote: Thanks for the critique. I'm glad you have been reading. I'd be the first one to say I have a long way to go to being a great writer. Maybe I'll get more time to continue to work on my stories and hopefully improve over time. Certainly, even the best of writers wish nothing more but to improve as they go I'm sure. Do you want to be a writer or is writing Time Rider just a pass time? __________________ Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

Posted: 21 Sep 2009 06:11
	Registered User	Posts: 25 Join Date: Jun 2008
Dig the TR/Deadlaw vids if you haven't already: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=acKTdOzXB1M http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XMR8c_KKXNA http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20h62U9IopM http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3C9b-cEmn7E

Posted: 21 Sep 2009 17:54
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Thanks for posting the links mastar! Quote: Do you want to be a writer or is writing Time Rider just a pass time? Yes, I do, but I also have to work a lot on my websites and try to keep ad revenue coming in. If the economy was rocking again I'd probably take a week here and there to or maybe a day a week to work more on my comics. It sure is a lot of fun creating stories. I really do want to find time to work on them some more.

Posted: 21 Sep 2009 22:10
	Registered User Currently Offline	Posts: 393 Join Date: Sep 2009
Quote: Yes, I do, but I also have to work a lot on my websites and try to keep ad revenue coming in. If the economy was rocking again I'd probably take a week here and there to or maybe a day a week to work more on my comics. It sure is a lot of fun creating stories. I really do want to find time to work on them some more. Thanks to that freak Obama I doubt the economy is gonna be better anytime soon. __________________ Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

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