Conflicting Realms:A New Vessel

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Conflicting Realms:A New Vessel

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Posted: 01 Oct 2009 03:30 Last Edited By: The_Incredible_Floyd
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Realm of Deceit STRANGLE:Mabus! The time has come for the choosing of a new vessel to manipulate.In the recent time I've been spying on a place known throughout the continum as earth. It is there where you will find our new drone. Are you prepared for this paticular challenge? MABUS: Why must you insult my motivation for the choosing of a manipulate with word such as 'prepared'. I am ready as I will ever be Strangle. STRANGLE: Save the quips for someone who can't rip your eyes from the sockets with a mere thought. MABUS: Save the threats for someone who almost has equal power to yours. STRANGLE: The keyword being "Almost". (cackles amusingly) MABUS:Before I ready myself for a journey through the conntinum to my destination called earth. I need to be a little more informed on what our newest chosen vessel is like? STRANGLE:Your target goes by the earth name of Lucian Soulcer. He resides in a town called Ripzy in a land form known as Indiana. He is educated in a school called Ripzy High. Our subject is 16 earth years and has been going through a whole mess of troubles lately........ MABUS: (Interupts Strangle) Trouble's? You think just because a subject goes through trouble's he is deserving to be The Realm of Deceit's new manipulated vessel? STRANGLE:You nasty little wretched shit you didn't let me finish. As I was saying I sense a certain 'anger' in Lucian that I think is special. It is an anger that given a little possession by a Manipulter such as you could make him quit useful in our endeavors. MABUS:Lucian Soulcer sounds like a very wise choice then. Notice however that I used "sounds". STRANGLE: I already told you shithole do not question my vessel choices! You are to leave in our realm transporter so that it can transport you to earth. MABUS:So I should leave now? STRANGLE: Right after you are given this on last specific instruction. Are you listening? MABUS: No! (sarcastically) STRANGLE Ugh smartass! MABUS: (chuckles)Sorry I am ready to listen now. STRANGLE:When you arrive on earth I don't want you to manipulate the new vessel right off. You need to hide in shadow form and observe Lucian Soulcer. MABUS:Why is that? STRANGLE:If you observe him it will help you get a better feel on his personality.Besides I am sensing a traumatic event that's going to happen around the time you arrive on the earth. MABUS:I see. After this traumatic event takes place in his life there will be no one he will be able to to fight the control I will put him under! STRANGLE: If there isn't anything else the I will ready the Transporter. MABUS: Sounds like a damn plan. (The suddenly Strangle waves his demonic arm and by mental command a Continumm transporter lands from the top of the realm right by Strangle and Mabus. After it lands Mabus opens the latch and ready's his journey through the continumm to the realm of earth) STRANGLE: (laughing maniacally) hahahahahahahahaha! Stay ready for part 2.It will take place on earth (more specfically Ripzy Indiana). We will find out more about the Chosen Vessel known by the earth name of Lucian Soulcer and his tragic anger ridden life and why he is the perfect choice for the next Vessel of Strangles' ...............To Be Continued............... __________________ Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

Posted: 01 Oct 2009 03:41
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Let me know what you think about this tale? I really like getting feedback from fellow Fan Fiction writers. __________________ Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

Posted: 01 Oct 2009 10:33
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Sounds like a promising start. I want to find out more about Lucian's troubles. The 1 thing I would suggest is to tone the language down a bit for the site. I know I've strayed occasionally myself but I try to utilize the symbols $#@!%^&* as much as possible b/c you never know the age of the reader. Otherwise I can't wait to find out what happens when Mabus reaches Earth. __________________ Buy comics from mycomicshop.com

Posted: 01 Oct 2009 17:26 Last Edited By: The_Incredible_Floyd
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I was sort of Testing the waters on what I could get away with in terms of Language. I'll be sure to edit the cursing on my next story.Also I just reread and noticed some grammactical errors I'll have to work on. Other than that I'm glad someone is actually interested in my little fable. __________________ Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

Posted: 01 Oct 2009 18:33
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__________________ Duo attack. Lolz

Posted: 01 Oct 2009 18:52
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Thanks man. __________________ Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

Posted: 19 Nov 2009 10:32
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I am nearly a dead fan of you. Keep up. ____________________________________ Little Tom: Your mother wants you to take home two and a half men dvd, house md dvd, ncis dvd and boston legal dvd. Be quick, she is waiting.

Posted: 19 Nov 2009 19:06
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Quote: I am nearly a dead fan of you. Keep up. I'll try. __________________ Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

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