Conflicting Realms:Fell On Black Days (Part 2)

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Conflicting Realms:Fell On Black Days (Part 2)

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Posted: 01 Oct 2009 20:34 Last Edited By: The_Incredible_Floyd
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Earth (Two Teenagers are waiting at a bus stop one of the teens is Lucian Soulcer other is his peer Gibby Benson) LUCIAN: You know something that I've never understood Gib? GIBBY:What is it this time Lucian? LUCIAN:I've never understood why Batman doesn't just kill The Joker. GIBBY:Oh my god dude really? Anyone who reads Batman Comic Books knows why he doesn't kill the Joker it's against his code of Moral's. LUCIAN: It still bugs the @#%$ out of me. Doesn't Bruce Wayne realize how many lives he would save if he just ended the Jokers life. GIBBY:But Batman does not murder plain and simple. LUCIAN:You know what? GIBBY:What? LUCIAN: I'm sure I care for your logic on Batman. GIBBY: Holy @#%^ dude! It is not my logic it's every creator who's dealt with Batman's origin's logic (Lucian already angered pulls out his fist and punches Gibby right in the nose and blood spurts everywhere) GIBBY: What the %!@# did you do that for? (Gibby then readies his fist for a punch back but then the bus pulls up) (right when the bus pulls up and they walk in the bus door) LUCIAN: That's what you get Gibby when you disagree with Lucian Soulcer. (after the bus arives at school and two or three classes go by Lucian is just sitting at a classroom desk when he hears) Intercom Speaker: Lucian Soulcer please report to the Pricipal's office! Lucian: (thinks to himself) What the !@$# is it this time? (after walkin through the halls for a bit he is stopped by a bully named Clark Benson) CLARK: Hey you little @@$$&* Where are you going? LUCIAN: Not that it's any of your damn buisness but I'm going to see the Ripzy High principal. CLARK:No your not! (Clark walks up to Lucian and grabs him and throws him in the nearby boy's restroom and grabs his neck and pulls out a switch blade knife) CLARK: Alright you piece of crap My bro Gibby told me what you did to him this morning at the bus stop and that really pisses me off! LUCIAN: Oh it does does it? (then suddenly Lucian elbows clarks in the stomach and grabs his head and throws him near a urinal and begins to punch him in the face) LUCIAN: What the hell man? You think you can just grab me and throw me in the bathroom and expect me to take it like some little @#$%^? No sir I'm sick of being pushed around and being told I'm wrong Dammit! I get it all the time when I'm at my house and I get it here at school from @#$%'s like you and your brother! Well no more the torment stops today! (Then suddenly right when Lucian goes in for the killing blow to Clark's head The Ripzy high principal accost's Lucian and puts him in a headlock) Principal: That's it Mr. Soulcer two violent acts in one day is more than enough. You are to come with me to the office and hear your punishment! LUCIAN: (grunts in anger) ( the the pricipal explains That Lucian is expelled and Lucian's father is called to come and pick him up and a few hours after Lucian and his Father arrive home. Keep in mind Lucian's Father is plenty drunk now) FATHER: (walks up to Lucian's room)LUCIAN!(yelling) LUCIAN! LUCIAN: What the @#$% do you want? FATHER:Shut up you little @#^&. I'm tired of your %$%% attitude. (father picks up Lucian and throws him against the wall and smacks him on the face a few times) LUCIAN: Put me down right @#$$ing now! I don't have to take this from you! You're just like those $%^&holes from school. You always think you're right! (while lucian is up against the wall and his father pulls back for a straight punch Lucian swings his head to the righ and Fathers Punch misses athen Lucian knees his father right in the groin and falls to the ground. Then he picks himeself back up and grabs his lamp and bust's his lamp right over his father's head) FATHER: (Bloody and drunk) That's it get the #$%% out of this house right now! LUCIAN: I would be more than happy to! (lucian the runs out of his house without nothing but the clothes on his back he gets down the street a little ways when he hears a strange voice) VOICE: Lucian my son come to me! LUCIAN: Who the hell is there? WHO IS IT? VOICE: It is I Mabus from the Realm of Deceit and My master Strangle and I have chosen you to be our new vessel. LUCIAN:Wow! my dad must've slammed my head against the wall harder then I thought. MABUS: (IN Shadow form still) No No my boy. This is all real you see My master and I have been spying on you and we quite like the pure hate in your soul we think it could be useful. LUCIAN: Ha! Is this some sort of Joke? MABUS: Oh no son lucky for you it's all to real! Follow me my son and I will explain further. (Lucian follows Mabus) In part 3 We will find out if Lucian will agree to be Mabus and Strangles new Vessel or will he fight the urge and change his ways. ............... To Be Continued............... __________________ Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

Posted: 01 Oct 2009 20:41
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What is everyone's thoughts on Part two? __________________ Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

Posted: 01 Oct 2009 20:58
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Like when they are talking 'bout Batman & Joker. __________________ Duo attack. Lolz

Posted: 02 Oct 2009 03:26
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I like to incorporate things That I enjoy into my stories such as comic book references. __________________ Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

Posted: 02 Oct 2009 08:37 Last Edited By: new midnight avenger
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I feel sorry for Lucian I'm thinking your story needs the Mature label added to it if it were a comic, maybe it'd be part of the Marvel MAX line or something if we had a similar line on this site. I'm thinking Lucian will probably change his ways and become a sort of antihero like Punisher or maybe like Spawn or something using the powers to fight the demons. But I kind of want him to go pure evil __________________ Buy comics from mycomicshop.com

Posted: 02 Oct 2009 17:31
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I'm actually not sure what I want to do with Lucian just yet. I think I may have to brainstorm a bit before I decide. All the mature content in the story won't be an issue will it? For me it's hard to write a story like this without all the mature content since it does deal with themes like abuse and Demonic entities and what not. Otherwise I thank everyone for reading my story. __________________ Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

Posted: 19 Nov 2009 10:24
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It's OK, nice post. _____________________________ Little Tom: Your mother wants you to take home two and a half men dvd, house md dvd, ncis dvd and boston legal dvd. Be quick, she is waiting.

Posted: 19 Nov 2009 19:14
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Quote: It's OK, nice post Yeah I've pretty much come to grips with the fact that I have all these idea's I just don't really know how tell the properly. __________________ Don't you ever laugh as the hearse goes by,For you may be the next to die.

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