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 Conflicting Realms: Powerful Gifts (Part 3) 
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Comic Book Super Heroes Forum / Superhero Universe Characters / Fan Fiction / Conflicting Realms: Powerful Gifts (Part 3)
Posted:  02 Oct 2009 20:06   Last Edited By: The_Incredible_Floyd
Earth

(This take place literally five minutes after the last story and after Mabus Explains the Situation to Lucian more Clearly)

MABUS: Well,Lucian after hearing from me about The Realm of Deceit's offer What is your choice?

LUCIAN: Holy #$%^ Are you serious? Of course I want to be The New Vessel. It will give me a chance to cause Utter chaos and Revenge amongst all the people who have wronged me. I ACCEPT!

MABUS: As I knew you would!

(All of the sudden Mabus morph's into his true form and begins to glow black then he pulls Lucian close to him reaches into his chest rips out his human heart and places a Deceit cell to replace his heart)

MABUS: Now Repeat the Deceit chant and after that you will be our new Manipulated Vessel. MY HEART IS RIPPED OUT OF MY CHEST. NOW THE THOUGHT'S THAT PLAUGE MY MIND ARE SICKER THAN INCEST.MY HUMAN BODY IS FULL OF HATE. I'LL TEAR THIS @#$%ING COUNTRY UP STATE BY STATE.NOW I'M SOMETHING NO ONE CAN DEFEAT.I HAVE BEEN MANIPULATED BY THE REALM OF DECEIT!

LUCIAN:MY HEART IS RIPPED OUT OF MY CHEST. NOW THE THOUGHT'S THAT PLAUGE MY MIND ARE SICKER THAN INCEST.MY HUMAN BODY IS FULL OF HATE. I'LL TEAR THIS @#$%ING COUNTRY UP STATE BY STATE.NOW I'M SOMETHING NO ONE CAN DEFEAT.I HAVE BEEN MANIPULATED BY THE REALM OF DECEIT!
(So after the Chant is recieted Lucian is now offically the Realm of Deceit's New Vessel.)

MABUS: It is all done now my son.You are officially a Manipulated Vessel. You now will have unlimited telepathic abilities.

LUCIAN: Hell Yeah! @#$%ing Dark Phoenix Style!

MABUS: Oh My boy that isn't all the power you know possess. You also have the power of Flight now.Also the strenghth you possess is almost limitless now. You are to use these gifts for the destruction of mankind. Use these gifts to murder and rape anyone one you see.

LUCIAN: Rape?

MABUS: Oh yes my boy. In fact the other ability you have now is an accelerated sex drive. Meaning you will have to rape women in order to go on. For if you do not rape women or men depending upon what team you're on The desire will drive you  mad and your Deceit cell will overheat thus destroying you.

LUCIAN: DAMN!

MABUS: The same vault rules apply in terms of your murder habits.

LUCIAN: So if there isn't anything else can we .....

MABUS: We sure can. Right after I do something real quick.

LUCIAN: Hrrmm Hurry the @#4% Up ok?

(That something Mabus was refering to is the meeting on an astral plane with his master Strangle)

               Astral Plane

STRANGLE: MABUS!

MABUS: (Mockingly) Sir yes Sir!

STRANGLE: (annoyed a bit) I trust you found my vessel choice and everything went on without a hitch?

MABUS: For the first time in a long time ,yes it did.

STRANGLE: Oh that makes me very happy.Now that I know everything is good I will leave you to return to earth and teach our Vessel the ways of Destruction.

MABUS: Will Do!

STRANGLE: Return then

(Mabus then awakes from the physic trance he was under while reporting at the plane to strangle)

MABUS: I'm baaaaaack!

LUCIAN: @#$%ing Finally.

MABUS: Are you ready for our first evil deed?

LUCIAN: #$%% YES!

(The two evil maniacs take off into the sky with flight off to commit the evil they promised. But little does Mabus realize right when he took off a Deceit cell falls from him and floats a 100 yards down to Gibby Benson's yard. Gibby awake's in a Sleep walk Like trance and walks out into the yard and picks the cell up)

Next Story we will find out what happens when Someone like Gibby Benson has in his possession a Deceit cell. Also what evilness are Mabus and Lucian Soulcer exactly up too?

...............To Be Continued...............
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Posted:  05 Oct 2009 09:26
Yup you definitely need a Mature warning label on your stories.

Maybe at the top of your post before the actual story starts just put something that says Warning Mature Content or some such.


Lucian's gone evil and not Gibby's got one too? I wonder if he's going to be Lucian's archnemsis or his voice of reason to stop his mayhem?
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Posted:  06 Oct 2009 03:18
What would be the point of a warning label? I'm pretty sure you and one other person are the only folks who read my stories.
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Posted:  08 Oct 2009 00:27   Last Edited By: Bono Fett
pretty good floyd. The only thing I could suggest is get away from the script style and expand on the exposition a little. I'm waiting for the next chapter.
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Posted:  11 Oct 2009 02:45
I suck at exposition.
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Posted:  11 Oct 2009 02:50
I suck at exposition.
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Posted:  18 Nov 2009 10:22
8. Keep up postging.
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Posted:  19 Nov 2009 19:16
Well if you want me to I guess I should.
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