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Posted: 26 Nov 2006 01:41
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Here's all the pages I have done for the latest Time-Rider story up to this point. http://superherouniverse.com/timerider/4thissue/cover.htm Feel free to check it out, but there may be some errors. I'm going to go over it tomorrow to double check everything.

Posted: 26 Nov 2006 17:39
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interesting, the graphics are getting a lot better but you used "saw" where "seen" should be. __________________ "You...complete me."

Posted: 26 Nov 2006 22:26
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Thanks, I'm going to have to check it over for goofs. I'm way behind today though, I've been taking it easy today. After church took the wife to the park to play some b ball. Ate some pizza, now I've got to read some comic books and do a little work on the net. So many things to do, so little time. So what do you think, do you think I'm doing ok with the story part with what little I've got done. I can't wait to get to some fight scenes. But dog gone it, I figure I've got to have a reason for all the fight scenes. Well as much as possible.

Posted: 26 Nov 2006 22:30
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yeah its great, finally a Christian superhero i wish i could just sit around and read comics and watch movies and drink soda and life would be awesome!!! i can't wait until i have an empty summer to do just that. i'm going to the comic con this summer. my first ever comic convention, it's gonna rock! i had an idea for a comic with a bored detective fed up with superman for getting all the bad guys leaving him to clean his desk. just an idea, we'll see if i ever make it. __________________ "You...complete me."

Posted: 26 Nov 2006 23:27
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Now that would be a different character. Maybe a good character for the Superman comics as another superman cast member. What page was that saw on where it should have been seen, just in case I don't find it?

Posted: 26 Nov 2006 23:28
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Whoops , think I found it page 9.

Posted: 26 Nov 2006 23:30
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Here's the big question, and you tell what's going on in my story so far? Are all the flashbacks confusing?

Posted: 27 Nov 2006 18:57 Last Edited By: Tim
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added 2 more pages page 10 page 11 So so far that leaves us with the new improved Time-Rider lost into an alternate 1971 where it appears some great war has taken place. In the midst of the destruction and debris with nothing left to do Time-Rider, John Martin explores this strange world while thinking back to how he got there in the first place.

Posted: 27 Nov 2006 19:24
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nice new pages, and the flashbakc make complete sense, the only thing that confused me was wether jake died or time rider's brother. and when. __________________ "You...complete me."

Posted: 27 Nov 2006 19:36 Last Edited By: Tim
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Luke his brother, dies during the attack on Pearl Harbor. His buddy Jake is with him on the ship toward the last flashback.

Posted: 27 Nov 2006 21:46
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ahhh, thanx __________________ "You...complete me."

Posted: 27 Nov 2006 22:47
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no problem

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