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Posted:  26 Apr 2007 01:08   Last Edited By: Lectrohm
Yay! Here's the season finale!

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Chapter 14; Screech
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     The two heroes speed toward the explosion to find a bank robbery.  'I got this' Wraith says, 'Watch and learn'.  Ohm crosses his arms and hovers over the street.  With his last word Wraith jumps from building side to building side down to the ground and takes out his spear.  It extends and as he speeds toward the group of thieves knocking them over 1 at a time in a furious motion of using his weapons, not killing them, but pinning them to the wall so that they can't escape.  After a few minutes, Ohm hovers down as Wraith approaches him.

    Wraith: How's that? (He says with confidence)

    Ohm: Not bad.

Ohm shoots his hand straight at Wraith, out of instinct, he ducks and the energy hits a thief that he missed blasting him into the wall, knocking him out.

    Ohm: Missed one.

    Wraith: Meh, coulda' warned me.

    Ohm: Where would the fun it that be?  Besides, I couldn't let you have all the fun. (He says with a smirk)

Suddenly, a screech with deafening proportion pierces through the street knocking both Wraith an Ohm off their feet.  Covering their ears, they stand up with great difficulty to see a figure at the end of the street holding his arms straight out.  Something is on top of his arms, but it's impossible to tell at this distance, especially at night.  When he sees the two heroes get up he runs off around the corner thus causing the noise to stop.  'After him!' Ohm yells as the two superpowers dart towards the end of the street, they turn to find no one is there.

    Wraith: Who was that?

    Ohm: I don't know but I intend to find out.

Ohm heads back to his apartment with Wraith.  As Mike and Ron look through different material on recent events an alarm goes out on Mike's police scanner that Potentia has escaped from jail and is in hiding.  All of the sudden a man in a pure black jumpsuit with 5 white rings, one inside the other, on his face mask interrupts the scheduled program.  The man and Potentia are standing in a blank white room.

    Amp: My name is Amp, I'm sure you all have met my lovely partner. (The camera turns to Potentia, then back) I trust that everyone in this city has already heard the power of my sound device? (He holds up his arms showing a electronic tuning fork device on both arms). That was just a small demonstration of my power, but enough to knock two superheroes to their knees.  (Ron and Mike frown) The city has given me a weapon in that, when I turn on the juice, the sound will be so loud it will literally shatter human bone within a 50 mile radius.  My demand? 1 million dollars into my on-service account by dawn, otherwise Manhattan will have its last rave. (The T.V. goes out)

    Ron: We gotta do something.

    Mike: Don't jump ahead.  He said the city gave him a weapon, how? There were no huge sound devices that needed police transport as I recall.

    Ron: What about some sort of radio tower?

    Mike: ... What if the weapon IS the tower?

    Ron: You lost me.

    Mike: Hasch Ind. One of their towers is shaped like a giant tuning fork; it was built for free for Steven Hasch in honor of his generous services.

    Ron: He'll hook up his sound device to the tower's metal structure causing it to act like an overgrown tuning fork! (Ron looks at the clock) We have 10 minutes to get over there, move move!

Mike and Ron both almost instantly change into their suits; Ohm flying out the window with Wraith running down the wall onto his bike and in seconds their off towards the tower.  6 minutes.  As they approach it, they see Potentia standing idol in front of the entrance.

    Potentia: Guess who is back?

Potentia throws up her arms as 2 fly-traps come up from the ground, one grabbing Ohm in its jaws and the other grabbing Wraith's bike.  People flee the scene here and there as Wraith flies off his bike and away from the flytrap catching his balance in mid-air, then, in mid spring, and in mid flip, he throws the stars at Potentia, without moving, she raises a root to take the hit.  His bike automatically let's loose a series of explosives killing the fly-trap.  A giant surge of light explodes as the fly-trap holding Ohm bursts into flames and falls to the ground.  Ohm, circled with energy gently floats to the ground where Wraith landed. 

    Potentia: This--is going to be fun!

Potentia yells in fury as five huge vines grow up from the ground to sky scraper length--and spawn purple and green flowers.  As soon as they blossom, huge barbs shoot down at two heroes.  Side by side, the two heroes exchange the same smirk as they have the same idea.  Wraith takes a dozen or so stars and flings them at each barb and flower, Ohm then charges them with electricity so they sear in and out of the vines ending their parade of color. 

    Potentia: Little help here...

    Amp: Just tuning up... (Ohm and Wraith both look up to see Amp on a building) Tell me if you like this note.

4 minutes.  He blasts a screeching noise louder than the one before; Wraith is knocked back into a car as Ohm is knocked back into a building.  Hands covering his ears, Ohm is unprotected as a thick vine shoots straight into him blowing him back through the rest of the building.

    Potentia: Dibs on Sparky!

Amp drops down to Wraith holding the noise makers next to him, in agony Wraith takes his axe and chops the tuning forks clean off of Amp. 'Damn!' Amp yells as he picks Wraith up still recovering from the splitting pain, and tosses him into the light post.  Meanwhile, Ohm who is recovering as well, flies up from the building to see 2 more barbs flying at him.  3 Minutes 'We don't have time for this!' With his last word, he unleashes, at the top of his lungs, letting out a deafening explosion as pure energy envelops him crackling here and there.  He screams as he charges up, the barbs hit the energy and disintegrate on contact.  Potentia looks in awe, then in disgust as she turns her own arms into vines that grab Ohm's arms and legs so he's unable to escape; and tosses him from building to building like a rag doll. 
     1 Minute.  During this, Amp and Wraith are exchanging blows, Wraith leaps back pulling out a huge sword from his back, then going lunging forward, he hacks away at Amp's armored suit slicing off piece after piece stunning Amp after each hit.  Then, in one fluid motion, he disappears and reappears behind Amp; with a single strike, Amp is knocked out. 

    Wraith: I'm going for the device! (He leaps from the building side to the tower and runs up into an open window)

    Ohm: (Being swung from building to building) I'll--take care--of this--pain!

30 Seconds.  Ohm then spins at super speed around Potentia wrapping her vines around her.  20 Seconds.  Wraith darts back and forth looking for the control panel knowing every second counts.  10 seconds.  Still at high speed, he pulls the vines causing her to spin at a super fast in a circle.  When she slows to a stop all dizzy, Ohm makes one solid punch knocking her out, and tosses her next to Amp.  5 Seconds.  Wraith reaches the top center of the tower. 4, he spots the control panel at the other side of the platform and throws a star.  3...2...1--Crack--Bzzpp.  The Machine cracks and explodes, Wraith breaths a sigh of relief along with Ohm who sees the small explosion from the street.  Minutes later Wraith walks out of the building.

    Wraith: That--was close.

    Ohm: (Laughing) We did it.

    Wraith: Justice, for the win! (They high five)

The next day at the airport, Mike meets up with Ron who's heading back to L.A. 

    Mike: So, what'd you think about this trip?

    Ron: Action packed, I'm definitely coming back soon.

    Mike: Here's to that. (Mike slips him the lightning bolt communicator making sure no one sees) I think you know what this is for.

    Ron: I've got an idea.  (Walking of towards the private plane and waving) See ya later Mike.

Mike waves back and watches as the plane takes off.  He heads back to his apartment and gets comfortable; he notices a special report as he turns on the T.V. 

    Announcer: A letter dropped of here this morning by Ohm tells us that the new dark vigilante from L.A. calls himself "The Wraith" and that he's on the side of good.  During the crisis last night with Potentia and Amp, Wraith and Ohm teamed up to save the city, here is our thanks to you two. 

Mike smiles as he turns off the T.V.

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I'd like to say that not everything in here has been my idea, many thanks to DC and MARVEL for some of the scenario ideas.  The character Lectrohm on the other hand is entirely my idea.  Also, a big thanks to Ron, for allowing me to use him in my story as well as the character, "The Wraith" which we molded some ideas of ours together to make one kick-arse character.  Also a thank you to Philip, also based on my friend, and Rob (Schneider, my cousin) for being in the story.  (Rob, if this ever becomes a movie I might need some help )  My final thanks are to you for reading the story.

Season 2 will start Sunday!

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Posted:  26 Apr 2007 14:51
Oh I forgot, but you did say Rob Schneider the actor was your cousin didn't you? Say did he come to this site to read it? That would be cool.

Got any pics on the way for the Wraith?
Posted:  26 Apr 2007 17:26   Last Edited By: trfrady
Wraith is the next character to be pictured, after that will be Pyra, and the other 2 characters who I will introduce later on in Season 2.  It's been a little over a week since I sent out the sketch of Drake so Gerry should be done soon.
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Posted:  26 Apr 2007 17:56
Tell your cousin, Tim says hey! I know that sounds like something Gomer Pyle would say.
One of these days maybe Time-Rider will be a movie, and I'll meet a bunch of movie stars. Maybe Rob and Adam Sandler could play in it. I could see Adam playing Jake or maybe Time-Rider for that matter. I was thinking, you know the way the internet is and all, I bet it wouldn't take much to start a rumor that a proposed movie for Time-Rider was due in say 2009, and that some big name actor was already picked. So everytime somebody did a search for that actor, Time-Rider would pop up. Now wouldn't that be interesting.
Posted:  27 Apr 2007 01:37
lol, i wouldn't get ahead of yourself, I'll be lucky if I can get my story published before college.
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Posted:  27 Apr 2007 01:57
Hype is a powerful thing though. All you need is to get your product or character recognized by everybody and you can turn it into profit. hmm need a huge gimmick

Anyway it's time for Smallville in 3 minutes got to go.
Posted:  27 Apr 2007 04:00
lol, trueI wonder where we could host out characters?

I have another hr before Smallville.
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Posted:  27 Apr 2007 15:03
host out characters? what do you mean?

Smallville rocked!
Posted:  28 Apr 2007 01:16
I dunno, put them on websites, send things through the mail. anything.
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Posted:  28 Apr 2007 15:58
oh, ok, I thought it was some new lingo I wasn't aware of. I just figured out what lol meant a few months ago. I've been on the net for a few years, but it's hard to keep up with all the stuff.
Posted:  16 May 2007 01:04
Just follow the 4 P's from Marketing:

Product
Price
Place
Promotion

The key is keeping all four of these in balance!! 

Awesome stories Aero!! 
Posted:  01 Jun 2007 19:30
Can i help design another character, please
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Batman rules over all!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted:  01 Jun 2007 20:53
sure, e-mail me information in my profile
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Posted:  29 Jul 2007 13:46
if u publish it u shud try make a company and publish time rider for tim aswell...or just publish urs and ask ur boss to bpublish tims...number 1 makes more money tho
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i have the IQ of 1000000000000000000(iforgot the negative

all the roads we have to take are winding,and all the lights that lead us there are blinding
Posted:  29 Jul 2007 13:48
also...make sure they come out in england aswell dood dont wanna miss em if they come out(im english)
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i have the IQ of 1000000000000000000(iforgot the negative

all the roads we have to take are winding,and all the lights that lead us there are blinding
Posted:  29 Jul 2007 16:10
If i ever publish it I'll try to make it world wide
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