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Comic Book Super Heroes Forum / Super Heroes / General Discussion / Fan Fiction / the Street Angel in...The Endless Alley
Posted:  17 May 2007 03:25
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Its sunrise in Fair City, the sun's rays light up the dark alleys. For some the night was a blur of parties and drinks for others...it was their last...

THE STREET ANGEL AND THE BACK ALLEY KILLER!


The cops have their hands full as they try to hold back the crowd that gathered outside the alley. A tall man walks through the crowd, wearing a tan trenchcoat along with a white fedora.

The Guard "Yo buddy ya blind? Da places closed."

The mystery man looks up to the cop showing a small black domino mask that covers most of his face.

Guard "Uh...I'm sorry sir! Didin't know ya was da..."

The masked man smiles and puts a finger over his lips.

"Ssshhh keep it under your hat."  He walks past the guard but turns around.

" 'ey if I give ya a 40 ya think ya can keep them vultures outta here?"

Guard "Hehe Easiest job ever!".

The maked man reaches in his jacket and hands him a pair of twentys and the cop smirks as he tucks it in his pocket.


He nods at the cop and walks down the damp zig-zag alley to the end where a man was waiting for him.

Captain Frost "Was that really necessary, Street Angel?"

Street Angel "The cop thing back there?"

Captain Frost "Ya."

Street Angel "One most make friends fast Captain and nothing in this city speaks louder then green."

The captain chuckles as he walks the Street Angel to the body.

Captain Frost " Meet Romeo de la Castillo. A 21 year with a history with the ladies."

Street Angel kneels over the body and rises the cloth to examine it.

Captain Frost "Romeo's a VIP here and a regular, we asked around they said Cassonova here was hitting on a fine little woman who we were able to ID as Susan Smith. They get friendly and head outside to the alley for a more...private place. Maybe he said or did something dumb cause the only kiss he got was hot lead to the back of the head."

Street Angel "And?"

Captain Frost "The ID says Susan Smith but its not OUR Susan Smith"

As Angel stands up Frost hands him a drivers license. He looks at the old woman whos obviously not young enough to even get out the nursery home.

Angel "Hhhmm must be a teen...*he starts pacing around the alley* They we're making-out here...and somehow somebody was able to shoot him in the back of the head...Maybe her dad fond out she wasn't home and came for her and saw her frenchin' Romero. He either had a gun or had one in the car and BAM!"

Angel "Weapon?"

Frost ".44 Magnum. This guy ment business..."

Angel "Hhmmm...*he takes a step back and looks at the scene one more time*"

Frost "Ya got a led?"

Angel "Ya...Take the bouncer to a sketch artist...you know how to reach me."


6 Mile and Colt Ave. is better known by the locals as El Barrio. Where most of the Puerto Rican and Mexican gangs rule the street. The Cops and the Mafia know better to mess with the rough gangs in El Barrio, it will be certain death if you showed up without being invited....

The Street Angel climbs up the Fire Escape, the rusty stairs let out a loud Cling-Cling as he makes his way up. One wrong step or even a fast change in weight can mean certain death but that doesn't even cross the Street Angel's mind...

The 23rd floor belongs to Juan de la Castillo, a local drug pusher and user. His bones ache and his muscles tell him promises of pain. The Street Angel reaches inside his jacket and pulls out a glass cutter and begins cutting a small hole enough for his hand to reach in and open the lock.

He enters the small apartment and looks at the pink walls decorated with posters of Pancho Villa and Thug life. He hears whispers and quickly hides in the closest. Two thugs wearing white tank tops and blue rags walk in. As the Street Angel listens to the two he careful turns on a tape recorder hidden in his trenchcoat.

" 'ey carnal sorry bout yer hermano but dem Puerto Ricans F#@^s are startin' shit ese. Catch ya later way." They handshake each other goodebye and the big gangster leaves the room leaving Juan all by himself...

Brrrring Brrring!

"Idiot!" the angel thinks to himself "You forgot to turn off your cell phone!"

"Whos dere?! Come out cabron!" Juan opens one of his desk's drawers and cocks the .45 and waves it round the small room.

Juan slowly walks up to the closet his gun ready for anything...he turns the door knob and opens fire!...




Juan sticks his neck inside the closet...no ones there...he looks back and back to the closet where his met with a kick to the face which sends him flying to his bed. The Street Angel drops from the celling and grabs Juan's gun...

Juan "Mab nob...ju brobed it!*he looks up and notices Angel aiming his gun at him*"

Angel "I'm not here for you Juan. I want to know what happened to your brother."

Juan "F^%$  ju gringo!"

Angel cocks the gun back.

Angel "You should choose your words more carefully Juan, all this macho craps gonna kill ya one day..."

Juan "OK OK! *he wipes the blood from his nose* Ya gotta understand dat Romeo don't take bein' told 'No' he been known ta follow a couple of mamacitas round. He was stalkin' this one chicka alot tho..."

Angel "Whats her name Juan?"

Juan "Stella Testarossa..."

For a moment the Street Angel didn't say a word.

"You really need to keep better track of things Juan *he toss the gun to Juan and walks out the window*

Juan picks up the gun and points it to Angel's back.

"Got you now puto!"

Angel looks back at Juan...Click Click...Juan looks back at the gun.

Angel "Like I said Juan. Keep better track of things God knows when ya really need something. *he smirks and slides down the water drain pipe*"

A old woman walks into the room

"Mi Hijito, why so quite? Its like you seen el diablo."

Juan "No abuelita...more like an angel..."
Posted:  17 May 2007 14:23
It's like a detective story, cool, thanks for blotting out the bad word. Welcome to the board. So the Street Angel is kind of like the Spirit, right?
Posted:  17 May 2007 23:55
Yup, the Street Angel is a lil' tribute to the Spirit, Dick Tracy and the great Humphrey Bogart!

Street Angel's is one of those guys who'll do the right thing no matter what but doesn't hesitate to shoot someone.

I'll give y'all some clues to his past so you'll have to keep reading the stories and play detective
Posted:  18 May 2007 01:06   Last Edited By: Tim
Say that sounds cool, I like classic detectives. Humphrey Bogart is one of those old cool guys you just don't see on today's movies.
Posted:  18 May 2007 05:29
Yay its rare this days to read or even watch a cool Bogart char like Sam Spade this days
Posted:  18 May 2007 05:30
Two blocks away from Juan's building, Street Angel calls Captain Jack Frost on his cell phone.

Street Angel "Better be good Jack, I almost bit the dust."

Cpt Frost "Cry me a river white boy. Anyway heres the score, the artist came back with the drawing only problem was she was wearing a one of those thick Gucci glasses so you couldn't see her face...But thanks to Officer Biggins he was able to ID her as Emily Rose."

Angel "Emily Rose as in THE Emily Rose?"

Cpt Frost "Ya-huh the Paris Hilton wannabe."

Angel "How did Biggins ID her?"

Cpt Frost "He reads People."


King's Hill a wealthy neighborhood where crooked politations and mob bosses waste countless of tax payers money. Its hard to even think about it but King's Hill is a dangerous neighborhood, where rich kids can buy some of the most dangerous and mind blowing drugs around. Its not like they get in trouble...Almost to often they use their daddy's money to stay out of jail.

As the Angel climbs over the fence and hides from the millions of cameras. He can't help but admire the scenery. From up here Fair City seems like a shining gem, filled with promises and dreams. Even Biesen Bay looks glamorous.

Two large men dressed in black guard the entrance, they seemed to be armed with Uzis. The Street Angel knows this isn't JUST somebody's manison...its Don Giovanni Testarossa's manison...Don Giovanni owned and still owns Fair City even if he lost some turf to smaller gangs but everyone knows...mess with the Testarossas and its pair of cement shoes and a quick nap in Biesen Bay.

If Juans right about Romeo stalking Stella, the Don's daughter...Then their'll be a gang war that'll tear the city in two.


Angel walks up to the door but is stopped by one of the big men.

Mobster 1 "Where ya think yoose are goin'? *he grabs Angel by the jacket*"

Mobster 2 "Ya!"

Angel "Easy now fellas...Just thought you two can use a nap is all"

Mobster 1 "Dat so wiseg--*before he can finish the sentence Angel slides two sprey cans hidden in his sleeves and spreys both gaurds*"

Mobster 1 & 2 "*Cough Cough*"

The mobsters drop to the floor, sound asleep. The Street Angel removes the clips from the Uzi's and chucks it up the roof.




Random party girl "Awsome party Stella WOOO!"

Stella "Thanks Tif...maybe you should lay off the sauce..."

Random Party Girl "ITS A PART--*throws up on Stella's tank top*"

Stella "TIF! ARG! Ew...God...gotta change my shirt now..."

She walks away from the party and down a long narrow hallway and into her room. Where the Street Angel's leaning on her computer desk waiting for her.

Angel "Hello Stella...been a long time."

Stella "What you doing here Angel? Here to sweep me from my feet?"

Angel "Quite the opposite really..."

Stella "Wouldn't be the first time...*while walking to her closet she takes off her tank top*"

Angel *politely turns back but not before cathing a glimpse* "Does the name Romeo de la Castillo ring a bell?"

Stella "Should it? *she throws a couple of shirts out of her closet*"

Angel "He only stalked you...*picks up the thrown clothes and folds them for her*"

Stella "Oooh that guy!...you jealous?"

Angel *in a sarcastic tone* "Oh ya...REAL jealous..."

Stella "Always funny ain't you?"

Angel "I try...*sets the folded shirts on her bed*"

Stella "The thing is...he wasn't stalking me. He was stalking Emily and Emily always hangs out with me so..."

Angel "Wait! THE Emily Rose?!"

Stella "Ya tiger, I know many actors you know."

Angel "First off...I wouldn't call her a actor...I could see her reading her cue cards. Second ...where were you last night?"


Stella comes out wearing a very revealing shirt and dasiy duke shorts. She smiles and sits on the bed next to Angel.

Stella "Thats what I love about you. Always a big boy scout." *she puts her arms around his neck

Angel "Look...Stella...I don't have all night..."

Stella "I was in Paris with my father...*she leans closer to Angel*...Why don't you love me?"

Angel "It will have never have worked out, Stella."

Stella "I thought masked men were...adventurous."

Angel "Who said I wasn't adventurous? Jumping from rooftops is quite adventurous in fact..."

Stella "Shut up and kiss me."

As they were inchs away from kissing each other the door slams open.

Random Party Girl "WWOOO! PARTY!"

Stella "NOT NOW TIF! *She turns back to Angel to discover his gone and the window left wide open.
Posted:  18 May 2007 16:01
Hey amfb, I created a topic category for your character here http://superherouniverse.com/messageboard/forum73.htm under superherouniverse characters to help keep things organized. If you want to, I suggest posting each chapter as an individual topic like the way Lectrohm is done. Let me know what you think about that idea.
Posted:  19 May 2007 00:36
Thanks Tim, I'm honored to have my very OWN category!

I will copy and paste the storys into the category and as for posting like Lectrohm...

No disrespect but I think everyone should have their own writing style and plus

Mine is like a book and every post is like a page or chapter to that certain book.

I hope you all are enjoying the story!
Posted:  19 May 2007 15:19
cool.
 
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