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Posted:  26 Jun 2007 05:24   Last Edited By: the amazing fish boy
After I wrap up the last chapters for Street Angel I thought about writing a story about life of a villain in jail.

Why? Who doesn't love Con Air? Or the Daredevil run where Matt is wonded up in Rykers? I came to the idea when I brought a Astro City issue with Steeljack and I was wondering how life for these superpowered human is. Sure normal prison is tough but this must be tougher!

So I kinda wrote a backstory and some chars are based actors who pop in my head when I wrote the mini bios. And don't worry I won't write anybody dropping the soap , I think it'll make a good story but I like to ask you guys what you think before I write...Heres the backstory and some bios I wrote...


Blackworth Penitentiary is a Maximum security prison where the U.S. Government hold metahumans criminals. Inmates wear orange jumpsuits along with huge metal collars which through neural feedback prevents the brain from using their powers. In a attempt to engage or deactivate or even remove the collar will sent a burst of electricity through the wearer's brain, stunning him/her.
The inmates dubbed the collar 'the Clamp'.  Blackworth is also known by as 'the Pyramid' for its desgins which duplicates the blueprints of a up-side down pyramid. Each layer are filled with inmates ranging from their crimes and powerlevel. In the tip of the pyramid lays the most dangerous criminals, never to see the light of day...literally. Blackworth is a island prison which is buried deep withen the island.
It is located somewhere near Rhode Island. Blackworth was built by Howard Blackworth and built it with one thing in mind...A unbreakable prison to rivial that of Alcatraz. So far no one was able to escape. Blackworth is runned by ruthless Prison Warden Laurence Skinner. Who along with Cheif Guard James Deadwood, enjoy torturing and even killing the inmates. The large ship which brings the inmate to the island is named the Charon.
After the ferryman of Hades, which brought souls into the Underworld.
Posted:  26 Jun 2007 05:33
The story will be told in a 1st person veiw and it'll follows Joe Blon who used to be the infamous Red Hawk and how he was framed for a murder of young teen hero Kid Ion. He must survive Blackheart and prove his innocents. Joe has the power to fly at highspeeds and a ultrasonic scream. I Modeled him after Robert Patrick

the Trojan Horse: Ulysses Davis was a car engineer who was tired of always being good and built himself a armor which he went on to robbing and hacking banks. He was arrested by Captain Apollo. Ulysses is a technopath, ability to manipulate technology. Modeled after Guy Torry

the Gargoyle: Clay Delios was a scrawny Greek immigrant who was picked on his whole life and when he was turned into a hulking brute made of stone he took went on a rampage exacting revenge. His rampage was put to a stop by American Hero and Samson. Clay has a rock-like skin which is almost impossiable to harm him along with super strength.
His a tragic character. Modeled after Benicio Del Toro

Mr. Death: John Kelly is just a kid who wanted to know how it felt to kill someone. He became a serial killer but was soon was defeated by the Prizefighter. Kelly has no super powers, has gun which shoot a gas of Fear pheromone.

Black Eel: Tobias Thomas was just a normal gang-banger but when working with Professor Mad he gained the ability to elongate his limbs and control small bursts of electricity. Tobias's the kingpin of cellblock D. Modeled after Common

Ten-Hut: C.K. Grant is able to duplicat himself. Almost nothing is known about Grant just that he was in the Marines before he turned to a life of crime.

Commander Koschei: Nikolai Vasily Korolenko was born in modern-day Kazakhstan. Nikolai joined the Red Army and lost most of his body in a gernade blast during a border dispute with China. Barely alive the KGB stepped in and turned Nikolai into a living cyborg, Koschei the Deathless. The Commander runs a small gang of ex-military terrorist ranging from ex-Soviets, Neo-Nazi, extreme Arabs and just about anyone who hates America.
modeled after Dolph Lundgren

the Raptor: Patrick Flynn was a archaeologist and scientist who mixed his DNA with that of a Deinonychus and not that of a Velociraptor which many suspect. Patrick is now able to turn into the Raptor under stress or when he becomes mad.

Mr. Unbreakable: Joseph 'Joey' Lance a London based mobster who's skeleton was replaced with a strong bone structure made completely of a unknown metal which leaves him almost unbreakable. He also possess super strength.
Modeled after Vinnie Jones

White Light: Ken Powell was a preacher who died and came back to life to do what he belives is God's work. His able to wake the dead and manipulate light. Modeled after Robert Mitchum

Plastique: A unknown spy who is able to shapeshift into any forum she desires. Modeled after Elizabeth Hurley

Big Girl: Julie Bigg can Can change her height of 100 feet

Mother Pain: Kim Hurt is a ex-dominatrix with the ability to inflect tremendous pain with just a stare. Modeled after Brigitte Nielsen

Darkness: Susan Blaq, a goth chick who can control the shadows.

Warden Skinner modeled after Avery Brooks and Cheif Deadwood modeled after R. Lee Ermey


And these are just to name a few! If you have a idea of a cool villain you can post it here if ya like.
Posted:  26 Jun 2007 13:38
Sounds interesting. Reminds me of that movie that's supposed to be coming out where Green Arrow goes to jail.
I'm a big fan of Prison Break
Posted:  29 Jun 2007 14:23
ahem...the face/off prison escape scene, quite frankly, kicked @$$
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